it could be good
Your right, it's to short. That's the only reason that your score is so low. I think you should slow down the "shiver effect" your using in the back round a little, it draws attintion away from your subject.
Good Job.
it could be good
Your right, it's to short. That's the only reason that your score is so low. I think you should slow down the "shiver effect" your using in the back round a little, it draws attintion away from your subject.
Good Job.
Good advice. I'll lose that effect. Thanks for the feedback.
it was ok.
it was ok, but not anything special, i'll be alot more impressed w/ the finished product. I think that was the main problem, it was just to short. forget scene 2, just splice 1 and 2 together and make one movie.
pretty damn good.
I liked it, consideriing it's your first. try to add more full range movement in your charactors, and more speaking. Besides that I think you got the idea of scene structure and all that. Also don't feel like just because you have drawn it that it needs to be in the movie, it's ok to edit your work a little harder.
weak
I'm tired of these cock and lock movies, they were funny about a year ago, but now they're just boring. On the other hand I can tell you put some decent work in, props on that. I wish it was the effort that we voted on.
nice
decent flick man, keep it up.
thanks, i will
pretty damn good.
I really dug your flick...good job. a little long, but very kick ass.
very cool
I really dug this flick. very good job, not sure what it was about, but it was well drawn and well thought out. keep up the good work.
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